Business Etiquette Design 1

I made this poster for business club as a request of my friend. But I am not sure they will choose it for their event...^_^ but i would like to share my experience with everyone.

I used elements of design to make it: dominance and subordination, coherence, positive and negative.

Black, white, gray and red are those colours that I chose for the poster. It presents the formality and luxury of the event.

My inspiration came from the word " ETIQUETTE " and my view on the business enterprise. Business man and woman are genius and active.

But this is the first time I make a poster. So what do you think about it? Will you have something to recommend me to make it better???